EXAMPLE OF A ROUGH DRAFT FULL

EXAMPLE OF A ROUGH DRAFT FULL

Add an introduction which presents your thesis and summarizes your points with a hook, and add a conclusion which presents your thesis again with your argument summarized in full in a way that reconnects to the immediate concerns of your readers.

Make your main points into separate sections, and remove the numbering. This is the part where your paper finally looks like a paper. Whether or not your instructor wants to collect your outline, it is good to have a general plan for your paper written out going into it, so that there are not redundant sections and so that each part has clear evidence and clear transitions.Īfter outlining, it may even seem simple to just explain each point more until it becomes a paragraph, adding sources, etc.

Review points and restate thesis see above

A family in poverty will reduce work efficiencyĪ.

A family in which both parents are more able to fulfill the needs of child care is more flexible and in turn healthier and more able.

Healthier families contribute to a more productive workplace

Both parents should be involved in thisī.

Children form intense bonds early in life Paid leave helps to incentivize potential new parents.Ī. Even if a population is allowed to decline, the decline must be gradual to prevent economic collapseĬ.

Large-scale immigration is not as reliable as domestic birth rateī.

population growth is sustained largely by immigration should offer paid maternity leave for both parents of a child.Ī.

Example of a rough draft